cubanseapower (cubanseapower) wrote in writingcritic,

A bit difficulty.

So people have been saying that I need to make my writing a bit more realistic. And I was wondering if you nice people could help me out here?

So here's the thing. Right now, in my story, these 2 brothers who are pickpockets get caught stealing and are getting chased by the cops. But while on the chase, they gotta stumble upon this one chick, who they gotta take home and deal with later. In my story right now, they just stumble upon her in the middle of the road, beaten and unconscious, which is unrealistic.

I was wondering if any of you guys had some creative minds out there and were willing to help me out into some different possibilities as to how the brothers bump into her? Help is greatly appreciated. :)
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